Friday, May 1, 2015

Revision


My favorite writing was on "Physical and Personality Traits", because it was challenging to write and really fun as well! I really enjoyed how I had to put all these into one fictional person and loved the funny outcome of the story in the end.
My least favorite would be "This I believe" because it was hard for me to open up myself to others and share my past life and my beliefs, but it also helped me to over come that fear, so I am glad that I did it.
The three observations that I see are my page breaks, learning to not use the same words, and learning to use different words more freely.
The most profound I would say is learning to use more page breaks in a story, "more paragraphs". I see this is very obvious in my blog, and very important because it lets the reader know when one subject ends and a new one begins in a essay.
I would probably change my grammar and editing, I feel I still need to learn this.
What I liked best about this course is how it taught me not to be afraid to write even if I am not a good writer. It also helped me to write my thoughts when it is hard to talk about them, it was easier to write about them.
What I liked least I would say is probably not having a lot of group help with-in my group. I liked all the people in my group they were really nice, but I just feel that some of them were hardly here.
If I could have a do-over I would have wrote more on my blog.
What I learned about myself as a thinker and a writer is that even if my grammar is not right and I do not know how to start a introduction to a story or a ending, I should still write and not be afraid to. I also learned how to let myself be more open and share my opinions and thoughts. I really enjoyed it.
I feel like you did great Mrs, A. I really think the only thing you could have done for me to improve this course would probably have been to even out the groups when we had group projects to do. I know sometimes there were only me and Charles in my group or just me and two others.
For my participation score of this course I would say," I have not been in school in twenty years this is my first semester so it is hard for me to evaluate myself." I was here every class and did participate and engage. I really enjoyed this class and I am going to miss everyone, hmmm? I don't know I would say probably an A for all that but I am not the expert or Instructor.